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| civilengr |
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Joined: 25th Oct, 2007
Topic: 11
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Age: 26
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| Posted on:1st Oct 2008, 3:28pm |
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 Urdu Poetry: Dam Ha Kya?
Aadaab arz hai..Janab is mehfil ko jamanay ka maqsad-e-qule yae hai kay urdu kay hawalay say apne salaheyato ko pehchanna seekha jae..
To dam hai kya?
Iqbal, Ghalib kay asshaar to aap nay bohat copy paste kar leyae..Kuch apne bhe sunaeyae na..Mai nay apne majazee muhabbat ke ik nakam si mulaqat ka naqsha apnay alfaaz may kuch yu kheencha hai..
Shikwa: Na baat tum nay ke, na hum kuch keh paey
Hum teray intazar may parhar kay ho gae..
Jawab-e-Shikwa: Yae kaisa intizar karaya janab nay
Khud bhe pathar kay ho gae hum ko bhe kar gae
Par aap kay iss shayer say dil ko sukun hai
Warna to hum samjhay thay kay pathar dil ho gae..
Dam hai kya? apne poetry batao zara..
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| s4u |
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Joined: 13th Aug, 2008
Topic: 68
Post: 6219
Age: 17
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| Posted on:1st Oct 2008, 3:36pm |
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oye ye to dum hi nikalne wali bat ki aap ne..hehehe
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| khayali |
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Topic: 40
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Age: 22
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| Posted on:1st Oct 2008, 8:42pm |
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 civlinger
yar ye ap ka nick bohat muskil sa hai,,
kher bohat achy ,,,,,,,,,,,,apki koshish achi hai |
| civilengr |
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Joined: 25th Oct, 2007
Topic: 11
Post: 38
Age: 26
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| Posted on:2nd Oct 2008, 1:53pm |
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Thanks sir Muhtram maira nick Civilengr matlab Civil Engineer. Aap mujay kuch bhe keh kay pukaro yaar.. yae he bari baat hai kay aap nay lift kara di.. Oay DAM HAi KYA? Apne koe poetry banao or send karo na.. koe milli naghma he keh dalo... S4u OAY..Har maan gaen ...hahahahaha... |
| s4u |
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Age: 17
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| Posted on:2nd Oct 2008, 5:27pm |
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civilengr har mana humari fitrat nahi.....
kabhii time mila to zaror sunaein ge.....
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| sunny007 |
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Joined: 22nd Dec, 2007
Topic: 66
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| Posted on:2nd Oct 2008, 5:55pm |
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s4u wo wala sher yahan par sunaon? |
| s4u |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 10:21am |
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Sunny uncle zaror sunaein...
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| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:04pm |
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acha to mulahiza kijie ek sher sunata hoon zara ghour se sunie
ek sher sunata hoon zara ghour se sunie
muje nahi aata kisi aur se sunie. hahahaha |
| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:06pm |
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now serious main UDAS! hoon teri udasi pe udas,
teri udasi ka sabab? Ae Andaleeb-e-udas
meri zindagi ka sab se pehla aur akhri sher hai ye
bataie kesa laga? |
| s4u |
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Age: 17
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:10pm |
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Sunny uncle buhot khoob
pehla to theik hai per aakhri ye bat theik nahi hai..
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| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:15pm |
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s4u pehla to theik hai per aakhri ye bat theik nahi hai..
kia matlab? |
| s4u |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:23pm |
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Sunny uncle aap ne kaha k meri zindagi ka sab se pehla aur akhri sher hai ye
to is k bare me keh rahi thi k aakhri kiu?Zindagi buhot taveel hai..aur ye sab kuch chalta rehta hai...kuch aakhri nahi hai...aur Allah tala aap ki omer draz kre.(ameen)
esa kiu keh r hain aap.
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| sunny007 |
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Joined: 22nd Dec, 2007
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:33pm |
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s4u thanks for your pray, bus inhe duawon ki zaroorat hai.
ab tak to ye sher pehla aur akhri tha lekin ab ek naya sher sooja hai.
mulahiza kejie
samandar ko paar kar k khush ho rahe thee ham,
khabar nahi thi k sahil pe doob jayenge. |
| s4u |
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Topic: 68
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:37pm |
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u always welcome wow ye to buhot hi acha soja hai.
keep it up yaar....
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| sunny007 |
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Joined: 22nd Dec, 2007
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 11:59pm |
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next na thi jis ko mere dosti ki qadar,
ittifaq se usi ko chah rahe thee ham.
osi chiragh ne bujaya mere haath ko,
jise hawa se bacha rahe thee ham.
ye meri apni nahi hai.......... lol |
| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 12:00pm |
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mistak osi chiragh ne jalaya mere haath ko.
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| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 12:00pm |
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mistak osi chiragh ne jalaya mere haath ko.
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| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 3:26pm |
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next arey koi kuch to kahe |
| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:3rd Oct 2008, 3:28pm |
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i think i think k kisi main b dam nahi |
| sunny007 |
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| Posted on:7th Oct 2008, 4:44pm |
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dam hai kia? arey yaar yahan par to kisi main b dam nahi hai. |
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