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| khoobsurat |
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| Posted on:11th Aug 2007, 1:09am |
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 Urdu Poetry: Aaj Yaad Bohot Tum Aae Ho
Aaj halki halki barish hai, Aaj sard hawa ka rakss bhi hai, Aaj phool bhi nikhrey nikhrey hain, Aaj un mai tumhara aks bhi hai, Aaj badal kaaley gehrey hain, Aaj chand pe lakhon pehrey hain, Kuch tukrey tumhari yaadon ke, Bari dair se dil mai tehrey hain, Aaj yaaden uljhi uljhi hain, Aaj taar yeh dil ke suljhey hain, Aaj yaad bohot tum aye ho, Aaj yaad bohot tum aye ho.
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| Bewaqoof |
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| Posted on:11th Aug 2007, 1:29am |
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 re: khoobsoorat
ji ha aaj karachi mai bahut barish hui hai. balkeh kal se horahi hai. jis ki wajah se poora shahar jal thal ho raha hai. aaj school bhi band the.
ap bhi soch rahi ho gi keh kis badzoq shakhs se pala para hai. lekin ap fikir na kare mai ne ap ki nazam read nahi ki. sirf title read karke barish ke bare mai likh dia. bazoq logo se request hai keh is nazam ko read kar ke reply de. |
| khoobsurat |
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| Posted on:11th Aug 2007, 1:34am |
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Bewaqoof sahab nazam read kar len, bohot hi asaan words mai likhi hai aur koi Bewaqoof bhi es ko samajh sakta hai, don't u worry. wese mai bhi karachi mai rehti hoon aur kal se hone wali barish se inspire ho kar hi yeh nazam send kari hai. |
| josh |
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| Posted on:11th Aug 2007, 1:43am |
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 Kal Ho Na Ho!
Aaj Ek Sweater Aur Pehen Lo...
Aaj Ek Razai Aur Odh Lo...
Aaj Ek Mufler Aur Lapet Lo...
Aaj Do Moze Aur Pehen Lo...
Aaj Ek Kehwa Aur Pii Lo...
Aaj Ek Heater Aur Chala Lo...
Kya Pata....
Kal Thand Ho Na Ho!!! |
| Bewaqoof |
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| Posted on:12th Aug 2007, 10:45pm |
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Barish ke baad School ki chutti kar do
daftar se ghair hazir ho jao
do dino tak ghar se na niklo
40 janaze ko dafna do
kai dino tak bijli ke beghai raho
barish se mutasira makano ki tameer karo
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| khoobsurat |
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| Posted on:13th Aug 2007, 10:04am |
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kiya sab bewaqoof hain? kiya kisi ko yeh poem samjh nahi aai, no replies on the poem??? |
| Bewaqoof |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 12:11am |
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re: khoobsoorat bat yeh hai keh samajh mai tu bahut kuch araha hai. lekin ap ki respect mai koi kuch nahi kah raha. sab ko pata hai keh ap ko kon yad araha hai.
chore purani bato ko. ab sirf aur sirf ose hi yad kare jis ka license ap ke pas hai. beghair license kisi ko yad karna achchi bat nahi. |
| noorbaba |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 1:00am |
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poem comments akheer :)
v nice poem ... kindly let me know kis ki hai ? i also asked u for the poets of the previous poems, zaroor mention kejye ga.
thank you. |
| khoobsurat |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 1:14am |
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Mr. bewaqoof !!!! aap kis qisam ki baten kar rahe hain, ek shareef, shadi shuda aurat par ilzam lagate howe aap ko sharam nahi aai. shayad aap ne piyar kisi aur se, aur shadi kisi aur se ki hogi (pata nahi kitni larkiyon ko bewaqoof banaya hoga), but shareef larkiyan, jis se shadi hoti hai, us hi se piyar karti hain aur mere dil mai mere husband ke siwa aur koi nahi. yeh sab mai aap ko explanation dene ke liye nahi keh rahi hoon, sirf es liye keh rahi ho ke aap ki soch saaf ho aur ainda aap kisi shareef larki par ilzam na lagaen. |
| Bewaqoof |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 9:11am |
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piar kisi aur se aur shadi kisi aur se khoobsoorat: dekhe mohtarma piar kee nahi jati balke ho jati hai. aur piar ka hona guna nahi hai. gunah tab banta hai jab ghair shrai tareeqa se piar ka izhar kia jai. is dunia mai be-shumar log aise hai jin ko zindagi mai kabhi na kabhi kisi se piar hua. lekin onho ne kabhi is ka izhar nahi kia. ab aise soorat mai os ki shadi kisi aur se ho jai tu kia yeh gunah hai. kia ham aise logo par yeh comments de sakte hai keh piar kisi aur se aur shadi kisi aur se. hamare country mai ziadah tar shaadi aise hi hoti hai keh piar ksi aur se aur sahdi kisi aur se. shareef larke aur larkia one-way love par hi zindagi guzar dete hai. woh ghair sharii harkat nahi kar sakte.
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| shahje2008 |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 2:55pm |
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Barish
Khoobsurat nice potry yar wah.
Regrds
Shah |
| shahje2008 |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 3:35pm |
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 Smile
Do you know your 1 smile can make 100 peoples die, so u can decrease this over population, so baby, please keep on smiling.
Smile a while,
& when U smile,
smile another smile
& soon there will b miles
& miles of smile
bcoz you smiled .
i wish your day is full of SMILE
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| kim84 |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 4:10pm |
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 SHAAM SY PHLY!
Shaam say pehlay mera anna zarrori tu nahi hai
Her shaam sung teary bitana zarrori tu nahi hai
Cahat agher dil main othi ho tu phir bhi
Her baar yeh cahat jeytana zarrori tu nahi hai
Maana tum ho aik jaltay ho deepak
Per hathooo ko her shaam jalana zarrori tu nahi hai
Bicaher bhi jayeee agher apnoo say koi tu
Per her baar oss ko manana zarrori tu nahi hai
Khushboo agher yar ki mehki ho 4roo sooo tu
Phir phooloo saya aghan ko mehkana zarrori tu nahi
Kamil koi piyar main hota nahi hai RAJA
yeh affwa ser-e- aam pehlana zarrori tu nahi hai
Rgds
KIM 84 |
| HUM TUM |
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| Posted on:15th Aug 2007, 7:38pm |
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vry nice vry nice poetry
members sy guzarish hi apany apany comments dejiyee |
| noorbaba |
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| Posted on:17th Aug 2007, 1:42am |
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I think nobody likes to reply me ? mohtarma khobsurat mein ik do baar pehley bhi pooch chuka hon k yeh kis ki poetry hai, naam to bata deen poet ka ? but no response
koi ghalti ho gye hai to mazrat chahta hon. |
| josh |
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| Posted on:17th Aug 2007, 3:06am |
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Very Nice! o koi to noorbaba ko jawab day do, kab say poet ka puchh raha hai..
no doubt khoobsurat ki likhi hui poetry barish bohat hi achi hai or kim84 nay uska jawab bi bohat khoobsurti say dia hai.
sab say barh kar bewakoof k comments with khoobsurat explanation. i must say wonderful. no doubt bewakoof is right, bohat say log apny dil mai kisi na kisi k liye mohabbat ka jazba rakhtay hain, koi izhar kar deta hai or koi nahi kar pata. "Mohabbat Marti Nahi, Log Mar Jatay Hain". |
| khoobsurat |
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| Posted on:17th Aug 2007, 11:32pm |
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don't know i don't know about the poet, bas mujhe achi lagi to send kar di aap sab ke liye. |
| noorbaba |
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| Posted on:18th Aug 2007, 12:48am |
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re: khobsurat
thanks for replying.
agar kabhi pata chaley to zaroor bataye ga or baki poems ka bhi.
that was really very nice. i wud like to read more from this poet.
jazakAllah. |
| Ugly-Sana |
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| Posted on:18th Aug 2007, 12:53am |
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Kim 84 & Khoobsurat Very nice poetry. I really likied it. |
| kim84 |
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| Posted on:18th Aug 2007, 11:09pm |
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re: Ugly_Sana: hmmm if u like my n my sis poetry so i m posting one more...
vo log bahut Khush_qismat thy
jo ishq ko kaam samajhate thy
yaa kaam se aashiqii karate thy
ham jiite jii masaruuf rahe
kuchh ishq kiyaa kuchh kaam kiyaa
kaam ishq ke my aataa rahaa
aur ishq se kaam ulajhataa rahaa
phir aaKhir tang aakar my ny
dono ko adhuuraa chhor diyaa
Result: For those who didn't understan " in last stanza DONO KO ADHURA CHOR DIYA" mean k jb admi mar jata hi to sb kuch adhuraa reh jata hi......ab is sher my yee kha gya hi k admi na ishq k kam aya na duniya k.....Enjoy..
Rgds
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